Tuesday, 15 November 2011
Our chosen DPS register - TBC
Our overall register will be sophisticated but entertaining with the use of humour and abbreviations to make articles an easy read. However, there will be use of advanced and sophisticated vocabulary with a large amount of syllables to maintain a respected and professional view of the magazine. We hope to gain a positive reaction from readers and encourage them to want to know more about the bands and music we cover, in order to do this we will use an active and emotive voice. Our articles will be informative and believable with use of quotations and relevant background research.
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What do you think Becca? Is this the kind of register for our mag? Let me know if there is anything you would like to add or change. x
ReplyDeleteHey, I like it but, we chose the name 'Beatz' with the 'z' and I thought this was more modern and slang like, therefore shouldn't the DPS register be more informal rather than using sophisticated vocabulary. Also our target audience is 16-21 and they might get bored of the vocab and some may not understand what they're reading. I think because of the target audience we should keep vocab light to make articles an easy read. x
ReplyDeleteI think Rebecca is right here, look again at your target audience research analysis.
ReplyDeleteMiss King
Thanks for the feedback Bec! Now we have both written out DPS articles they should help us make that final decision for our register. x
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